Great details and colours +8

Wow! nice one!

beautiful, I love the expression in their faces and all the detail. I do find the text a bit distracting but it is still a top score job

Flowjoe

Very good colouring! +8

cool artwork. nicely executed. try and mute the text a bit next time tho

This suffers from "compartmentalized color", the common case of filling the areas of a painting with flat colors and then applying black and white to make "light" and "shadow". What to do to avoid it - well, first of all, follow the classic rule of "tone first, color second": the flawed coloring does exactly the opposite. Plan the color composition so all colors form a harmony. And think of how the colors interact: how presence of a colored object affects other color objects in the painting. The latter is a skill learned slowly, I have to admit, but it's a very advantageous one to have.
A good starting point / refresher is the section on color in "Creative Illustration" by Andrew Loomis. And of course, nothing beats exercising the eye by observation and identifying tone and dominant hue in everything.

Great job!

awesome work!!!